Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.
Teacher feedback:
WWW-Very good visual motifs of lighter and rose, good use of locations, inventive editing and jump-cuts, excellent station shots, good costume changes, good low angle of swing, good links between lyrics and visuals, excellent editing and match on action.
EBI- Too long, tighter editing for match on action, title on screen longer, more post-production(on screen lyrics, filter, transitions).
Student feedback:
WWW-Close-up of lighter, lyrics matching action and shots, good range of shots, good locations, good industry reference, good use of props, good visual motifs, cyclical nature, good shot reverse shots.
EBI- Could add more postediting like fade-ins, add better industry context, add colour grading.
2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.
WWW-Good and creative concepts, good choice of representative visual motifs, good use of accessible locations.
2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.
WWW-Good and creative concepts, good choice of representative visual motifs, good use of accessible locations.
EBI-Better range of shots, better post editing, more condensed and cohesive narrative.
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
This preliminary exercise seems to not be fully in line with my statement of intent as it mainly focuses on the other TikTok's in terms of advertising a media personality as well as advertising a soft drink.
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
I have learned how to plan and shoot a small-scale project as well as hope to upload and maintaining the quality of editing a piece of work.
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
I have learned how to plan and shoot a small-scale project as well as hope to upload and maintaining the quality of editing a piece of work.
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.
I would change part of the music video to have a move cohesive narrative , have some more closeups, include better post editing as well as more hand held shots to make it feel more like a conventional lower budget music video.
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