Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Teacher feedback: WWW-Very good visual motifs of lighter and rose, good use of locations, inventive editing and jump-cuts, excellent station shots, good costume changes, good low angle of swing, good links between lyrics and visuals, excellent editing and match on action. EBI- Too long, tighter editing for match on action, title on screen longer, more post-production(on screen lyrics, filter, transitions). Student feedback: WWW-Close-up of lighter, lyrics matching action and shots, good range of shots, good locations, good industry reference, good use of props, good visual motifs, cyclical nature, good shot reverse shots. EBI- Could add more postediting like fade-ins, add better industry context, add colour grading. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EB...
