Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

WWW-Well designed slides with a good colour scheme, good use of terminology and media language, such as zeitgeist, convergence, iconography, POV, embedded slides on research with detailed analysis.

EBI-Check spelling accuracy on slides, include less text on screen and avoid reading directly off it, improve body language and don't hold a water bottle, add more on industry and other theorists, highlight keywords and make more detailed treatments.

1) Research -- 4/5
2) Coursework concept -- 3/5
3) Language: terminology and theory -- 4/5
4) Representations / social and cultural contexts -- 4/5

5) Audience and Industry / digital convergence -- 3/5
6) Presentation delivery -- 2/5

    20/30

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW-Good concept, good representations, good use of theorist's, unique name, lots of detail, use of trends for Tik-Tok's, good use of language(chiaroscuro/quintessentially/racial otherness), good matching aesthetic, good artist identity, good introduction, good use of genre, clear vision/iconography, clear synergy.

EBI-Reading off the board, using bullet points instead of sentences, timing on slides, speaking louder, highlight keywords, add more on gender representation.

-On average:23/30

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I will need to slightly update my statement of intent to update both the terminology and about of media theorists present in my work to stay aligned with my shifting concept as I begin to produce due to possible logistic limitations and grow the wordcount for the next draft. My concept was quite clear and my audience was well defined and considered through general means by use of trends and digital convergence but it needs to be clarified through the media framework and audience and effects theorist. The project is quite achievable to film but there may be some wardrobe limitations that will clash with the formation of my project and as a result my concept may need to be slightly altered.